Now it’s time to write the emails, no easy task. Much will depend on your businesses’ own voice and tone, but there are a few simple rules we recommend everyone should follow.
Teach The number one goal of your emails should be to teach the user about the value they could be getting from your product. It should be nuanced, in-depth, and most importantly… teach the user something they don’t already know.
✅ Say this: They track three things via their website: signups, users who completed the setup flow, and users adding their credit card.
❌ Not this: They collect user data
Keep it simple At all costs, make sure you’re keeping your emails simple. Have just a single main CTA, with no more than three secondary CTAs down below. There should be one primary goal you’re looking to achieve. Don’t use three words when one will do.
✅ Say this: Prioritize personalization first.
❌ Not this: Personalization is the key to creating moments of delight throughout the customer journey.
Opinionated Don’t rehash older arguments a reader could find elsewhere. Before you start writing, ask yourself—what additional value can I add to what’s already out there? Try to level up what’s already there.
✅ Say this: A company with 2.5% churn is 50% (yes 50%) larger than the company with a 5% churn on a revenue basis.
❌ Not this: Retention is king.
Subject lines The primary deciding factor as to whether your email gets opened or not. If you spend 30 mins writing a nurture email, it’s worth spending at least 10 mins of that time on a snappy subject line.
Some tips:
Keep it short—5 words or under works well
Use sentence case —kind of a hack but seems to work well)
Ask a question—provided it’s an actual question the recipient could/would want to answer
Use ellipsis—another hack, but can work well in the right context
Describe the subject of your email—avoid clickbait at all costs
Write in lines, not paragraphs Nobody likes opening an email to a huge wall of text. Write your emails in short, snappy sentences that are easy for the reader to scan (and subsequently click). One thought per sentence/line of an email works well.
A good example 👇